My similes.
My similes are all about winter what I liked about this is that I leaned how to write similes and it was easy to write .The thing I did not like it was hard once I did it at first but I got some help and a simile has to have as or like and needs to be compare 2 things.
Kia Ora,Legacee
ReplyDeleteMy name is Peehikuru and I am a student in Room 4 at Tautoro School. I am 8 years old.
I really like your simile about Winter.
I liked your work because you said the snow is crunchy as cold chocolate.
Thank you for teaching me that a simile has to have as or like. I will remember that.
Blog ya later.
Kia Ora Legacee.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Dakota and I am a student in Room 4 at Tautoro School. I am 8 years old.
I really like your simile blog post.
I liked your work because it had nice words like crunchy, dumped and opening and ice is very cold so if you put it in a bucket and put water in it brrrrrrr.
Blog ya later.
Kia Ora, Legacee
ReplyDeleteMy name is Whetuarangi and I am a student in Room 4 at Tautoro School.
I really like your similes about ice and the cold weather.
I liked your work because the similes were great. You even gave me some advice about similes like to add as or like. I think you are successful in your winter similes. I did not know that snow is crunchy or snow feels like a pillow.
Blog ya later.
Kia Ora,Legacee
ReplyDeleteMy name is Rachel and I am a student in Room 4 at Tautoro School. I am 8 years old.
I really like your similes post.
I liked your work because I don't like winter because it is cold. I like the words that you used in your simile like solid as gold. I really like your similes work.
Blog ya later.
Hi Legacee's. My name is Piripi and I go to Paihia School. I really like your blog because once I did it too. It was interesting because it told me about ice.
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